The Glow & Go Transformation
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A woman investigates a mysterious new tanning salon, where clients emerge eerily changed. Her curiosity leads her inside the strange pod, risking her own identity.
Opening scene
The high street was dead at 8:00 AM, save for the rain rattling against the corrugated shutters of the butcher’s shop and the idle rumble of the 214 bus. I pulled my coat collar up against the damp chill, balancing my morning coffee as she unlocked the side alley gate leading up to my flat. Across the narrow pavement, the old vacuum repair shop had finally been cleared out. A white van was backed up to the curb, its doors wide open to reveal wrapped, heavy plastic panels and a stack of faded neon sign letters sitting on a wooden pallet. A bloke in a high-vis vest stood on the pavement, sipping tea from a polystyrene cup while his mate unloaded a tall, curved fiberglass shell painted in a chipped pearl-pink. I paused with my key in the lock, watching them haul the heavy gear through the stripped-out glass storefront under a freshly painted sign that read Glow & Go.
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Walk over and peek inside the storefront before they finish
I cross the street, my boots splashing through a shallow puddle that reflects the grey sky. The man in the high-vis watches me approach, his expression neutral, and I give him a tight, polite smile as I pass. I peer through the empty glass front of the shop, my breath misting a small cloud on the cold pane. Inside, the space is gutted. The walls are bare plaster, the floor is covered in thick plastic sheeting, and in the centre of the room, three tall, curved objects stand shrouded in heavy black plastic, like cocoons waiting to hatch.
One of the movers is inside, guiding the pearl-pink shell through the stripped-out doorway with a grunt of effort. The space smells of damp plaster and something else, a faint, sharp tang of ozone, like the air after a lightning strike. It’s a strange smell for a tanning salon, more like a workshop or a laboratory. I try to see what’s under the plastic shrouds, but the shapes are ambiguous—could be anything.
"Alright, love?" the man in the high-vis calls out, his voice flat.
"Just opening up. Come back next week." His mate inside laughs, a short, sharp bark, and says something I can't make out. I feel my cheeks warm slightly, caught snooping.
I give another small nod and turn away, walking back across the street. The white van’s back doors are still open, and I catch a glimpse of more equipment inside: coils of thick, black cable and what looks like a stack of white plastic buckets. The sign above the shop is freshly painted in a clean, modern font: Glow & Go. It looks far too new and cheerful for this tired stretch of pavement.
As I reach my own front door, fumbling for my keys again, I glance back. One of the movers is taping a large sheet of paper over the inside of the glass. It’s a temporary sign, hand-written in black marker: OPENING SOON – SPECIAL OFFERS INSIDE. A prickle of unease runs down my spine. The whole thing feels less like a business opening and more like a secret being installed.