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Close the folio and go check on Daniel

Your hand closes the folio before you can write anything else, the leather cover shutting with a sound like a held breath released. The brass clasp catches, not quite fastening, and you leave it there on the table with your coffee ring and your error still inside. The pen you slip into your pocket, heavier now, weighted with what it has done and what it might still do.

The stairs creak as you climb. You have not been invited, have not knocked, but the house seems to expect this, seems to guide your footsteps toward the door you left closed not an hour before. Flat 2. You raise your hand and pause, listening. No movement within. No television, no radio, none of the small sounds of a man avoiding his own thoughts.

You knock. The sound is small, polite, absurdly inadequate to the situation.

The door opens on the chain. Daniel's face appears in the gap, and you see immediately that the transformation has advanced. His eyes are still yellow, still wary, but something has softened in the set of his mouth, a tension released that you did not know was holding him together. He looks at you with an expression you cannot name—recognition, perhaps, or the beginning of forgiveness.

"You came back," he says. His voice is different, pitched lower, as if kindness required more breath.

"I thought you would. They always come back."

"I tried to—" You stop. What can you say? I tried to erase it? I wrote over it? The folio preserves all revisions, layers commands rather than replacing them, and you do not know if he knows this, if he can feel the strikethrough beneath the word, the negation warring with the original.

He opens the door wider, the chain still on, and you see his flat behind him for the first time. The financial distress you expected—bailiff letters, empty bottles, the archaeology of collapse—is present, but ordered now, arranged with a care that looks almost tender. The single window is clean. A plant sits on the sill, improbably green.

"I was going to ask you in," he says, and laughs, the same broken sound from before, but softer. "I was going to offer you tea. Christ. Do you understand what you've done to me?"

The chain rattles. He closes the door, and you hear it slide free, and then it opens again, fully, and he stands aside to let you enter the space where he has been rewritten.