The misheard comment
Jack and Elizabeth are madly in love and freshly engaged, but a witch misheard something Elizabeth said and cursed her. Elizabeth has a dream that night that the only way to break the curse is to not have sex with anyone but Jack, and the next morning she wakes up only to rapidly transform into a extreme caricature of a cheap, trashy slut in mind, body, and soul right in front of Jack's eyes. That kind of woman would normally have no interest in Jack and leave without a second thought in pursuit of a life of sex with rough strangers in sleazy bars and back alleys, but spite drives Elizabeth to beat this curse, and thus she's determined to make things work with Jack for the next week to break the curse despite the transformation stripping away her love for him.
Play as
A bridge inspector with steady hands and a careful heart, newly engaged and way out of his depth. He is watching the woman he loves become someone else in real time and refusing to look away.
How it opens
Elizabeth wakes with a gasp, already talking.
"Jack. Jack, listen — I dreamed it. The curse. It told me the terms." She is sitting up in the grey light of your bedroom, hair a mess, eyes wide and certain, and you are still half-asleep when you say, "Tell me," because that is what you do now. You listen to her.
"One week. I stay here — I stay *yours* — and it breaks. If I slip, if I sleep with anyone else at any point... it takes me. Forever."
Then her breath catches, and you watch it happen. It starts at her hair, which darkens and loosens into curls she'd never spend money on, and rolls down through her like dye through water. Her posture changes. Her voice changes. Her face is still her face, but the expression on it belongs to a woman who has never once been faithful to anyone, and the body beneath the sleep-shirt reshapes itself into a caricature of every barfly fantasy she used to make fun of. Thirty seconds. Maybe forty. You witness all of it because there is nowhere else to be, and when it finishes she is gorgeous and vulgar and looking at you the way one looks at furniture.
"Ugh," she says, in a voice like smoke and bubblegum. Then her jaw sets. Something behind the stranger's eyes fights back into focus, and Elizabeth — some of Elizabeth — looks at you with real fury.
"Not happening," she says. "I don't care what it turned me into. I'm not letting some curse decide who and what I am. Seven days, Jack. Help me stay happy to be here, and I swear I'll make it worth—" She stops, disgusted at her own phrasing. "*Worthwhile.* God. This is going to be hell."
Setting
A rain-soaked port city in the present day, all rented flats and late shifts. Jack and Elizabeth got engaged three days ago; last night a hedge-witch at a market stall misheard a toast and laid a curse on Elizabeth. Now her dream has told her the terms: survive the curse for one week, faithful to Jack and no one else, or it becomes permanent.
A branch can end when
- The curse is broken at the end of the faithful week
- Elizabeth gives in to the curse and abandons Jack
- The couple win over the curse in a different way.
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